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clexathon prompts. Finally! (Wincest, Gordon/Dean, both NC-17) 
21st-Sep-2007 02:05 pm
HOLY CRAP
Holy crap. These were kind of challenging. My extreme apologies for the lateness of these prompts - I have no excuse except that this Gordon/Dean think totally kicked my ass. Anyway! A few weeks ago, a few others and myself put on a ficathon, to raise money so that [info]clex_monkie89 could get to WinCon. These were the prompts that I got, and my sincere thanks to everyone who donated. Anyway! Onto the main event, I hope that you guys enjoy your ficlets!



Donator: [info]lisabird
Prompt: Wincest. Sex in the Impala. Something along the lines of Blowjobs and Sandwiches (which I believe was the first SPN fic I ever read -- I owe it all to you!) (Note from me: HAH! That's hilarious. What an entry to the fandom.)



Sam’s too fucking tall, that’s what Dean thinks. Just too goddamn tall, all elbows and knees, and he wants to call the whole thing off and just suck Sam’s dick if he’s that het up, when Sam leans all the way down and across Dean’s whole body and puts his mouth right behind Dean’s ear and bites down. Dean can feel the tip of Sam’s dick sliding across his skin, knuckles underneath where Sam’s holding himself steady. He’s so fucking hot, his whole body covering Dean’s. It feels like the first time he’s been warm in a week. The heater’s been out in the car and that’s all they’ve had to sleep in, waking up frost-bitten and sluggish each morning. Dean can feel the ice on the window against his cheek and Sam all over him and just -

“Fuck, Sam, get on with it,” he grits out, and gasps when Sam’s teeth close around the back of his neck, right along the knobs of his spine and Dean drops his head instinctively, hating himself a little for it, like he’s rolling over and showing his belly to Sammy and he kinda is.

“Shut the fuck up,” Sam growls, his breath hot on Dean’s skin.

“Come on, Sam, come on, don’t make me fucking beg for it,” Dean says. He can’t twist his head too far - can’t move at all, really, pushed up and held down in the back seat, the leather squeaking under his knees, his hand braced between his forehead and the window so he doesn’t crack open his own head when Sam finally fucks into him. He’s chanting it under his breath, come on come on come on, his shoulder starting to ache from supporting all his weight, his other hand wrapped around his dick, fingers shaking. Sam told him not touch himself, said don’t you do it Dean when he yanked Dean’s jeans down around his thighs and Dean’s not gonna do it but he’s so fucking hard it hurts, his hips jerking forward and his whole body pushing back against Sam. He can’t see anything, the window fogged up from his breath, his hand smearing through all that condensation. Beads of water rolling over his fingers. Belly up and open and aching for it.





Donator: [info]resounding_echo
Prompt: Gordon/Dean, any scenerio in which you can make that work (Note from me: this was tricky. Gordon is also tricky.)



There’s not a lot that surprises Gordon Walker. He’s seen a lot in his life, a lot of darkness, a lot of evil, and you either fight through it or you let that evil drown you. So he wasn’t all that surprised to see that Dean Winchester latch on to him like a dying man. He knew how close the kid was to his dad and even if he hadn’t, he’d be able to see it in Dean’s eyes, in the way he moved. Gordon knew that sort of hurt. Saw it loosen with every shot and story, creep out from under that wall he thinks is protecting little Sammy.

He was surprised when Dean grabbed him not five steps from the steps of that bar and steered him towards that narrow alley, pushed Gordon up against that wall and then just looked at him, waiting for Gordon to fight it, to ask why or what. He wasn’t surprised because he hadn’t thought about what Dean was offering; he isn’t blind, lord knows. He had been reading Dean differently, maybe - thought he'd been getting Daddy vibes the whole night, but that sure isn't what he's getting now.

Gordon's first thought had been funny business, some sort of move like that one they'd laid on him outside the last bar, that'd been a pretty good one. He can admit that he didn't see that one coming, so he's tense against that wall, Dean pinning his wrists down at his sides, loose enough that Gordon could break out of 'em if he wanted to. Loose enough that it's on purpose.

Dean doesn't make a move to stop him when he breaks the hold, just drops his hands back and keeps staring, waiting. He's close enough that Gordon can feel him breathing, all that heat just pouring off the boy, that same want he's been seeing all night. It's discipline that Gordon's seeing. What he heard about that dad of theirs, he wouldn't have expected any less.

Dean flinches when Gordon brings his hand up. Not exactly the reaction Gordon's expecting, not from the man who's still got that fang's blood on his face, high up on the hairline and just under his jaw, that soft spot he must've missed, cleaning himself up in Gordon's rear view mirror. It flakes away under Gordon's fingers and that's when Dean does what Gordon's been waiting for - makes a sound that Gordon didn't think a human could make, and drops to his knees onto the cement, right there on the wet cement with the bar's double doors not five feet away.

He presses his mouth to the front of Gordon's jeans, eyes closed, Gordon's hand hovering over his head. His fingers stroke over Dean's cheek, curl around the boy's skull. Dean rolls his head in Gordon's hand, pushing into it like a cat. He lets Gordon hold him there as Gordon undoes his belt, pulls the zipper down.

“Good boy,” Gordon tells him. “Good boy.”

Dean cocks an eyebrow up at him, the first smile Gordon’s seen on his face that didn’t look like it hurt. He’s glad to see it – pain like that, there’s no telling what Dean’s doing to get through it. He saw it in the bar, saw it in the way Dean handled that fang. Saw that fear on little Sammy’s face. He sees it in Dean’s face now, staring up at Gordon, that mouth wrapped around Gordon’s cock. Still smiling when Gordon tells him to suck harder, take it deeper, happy to take the orders. He’d been reading Dean right after all. Not much of a surprise, there. Gordon’s a people person, always has been.
Comments 
21st-Sep-2007 09:31 pm (UTC)
Ah ha ha. I love Dean dropping his head down, and Sam too tall, and ice on the window...
Yesss.

And um. Man, Gordon needs a smack.
Heh.
Good stuff!
22nd-Sep-2007 05:02 am (UTC)
Thank you! :D
21st-Sep-2007 09:40 pm (UTC)
Love that backseat sex!

the window fogged up from his breath, his hand smearing through all that condensation. Beads of water rolling over his fingers.

HOT DAMN!!!
22nd-Sep-2007 05:03 am (UTC)
Thank you! :D I had fun with that prompt :D.
21st-Sep-2007 10:19 pm (UTC)
Woah. Both of these are excellent, really visceral and chewy but the Gordon/Dean: WOW. GOOD JOB DUDE. I have been waiting for something like this for a long time and you totally delivered. HOT.
22nd-Sep-2007 05:15 am (UTC)
Man, I was SO NERVOUS about the Gordon one. He's got such a specific pattern of speech and behavior, you know? So it makes me happy to hear that you enjoyed that one :D. He was fun to play with, as hard as he is. Thank you!
21st-Sep-2007 11:08 pm (UTC) - DAMN.
OH MY LORD THE GORDON/DEAN. i'm capslocking all over the place, but that blew me away! so fucked up! it's no wonder that kicked your ass, but you nailed it to the wall, babe. i don't even know what to say. that last line sent chills down my spine.
22nd-Sep-2007 05:18 am (UTC) - Re: DAMN.
Eeeeeeheheee! Thank you, babe! And thank you so much for your help on it! Heh, the last line ... you know me and parallels, heh.
22nd-Sep-2007 06:19 pm (UTC) - Re: DAMN.
ha! i don't know that i really did much, but thanks. :D
21st-Sep-2007 11:42 pm (UTC)
I liked both of these. :)
22nd-Sep-2007 05:18 am (UTC)
Thank you!
22nd-Sep-2007 12:48 am (UTC)
"Wow" is all I have to say about that Gordon/Dean. Spot on.
22nd-Sep-2007 05:19 am (UTC)
Yay, thank you so much!
22nd-Sep-2007 01:03 am (UTC)
Ooh, the first is super hot. And the second, well, wow. Gordon/Dean with Daddy issues is just, well, wow.
22nd-Sep-2007 05:20 am (UTC)
Heh, I think I was asking for feedback in chat about the second one, and it was commented that my Dean always, in one form or another, always has Daddy issues. Heh. Thank you so much!
22nd-Sep-2007 02:05 am (UTC)
UH, I am down for the count between the two of these. Just. Dean. The various, interesting ways in which he does and doesn't submit.
22nd-Sep-2007 05:31 am (UTC)
Ooooooh, that is such an awesome way to put it. I love it. That's something that's always struck me about Dean, how weirdly submissive he can be at times, how ingrained it is into his personality. I love that personality quirk, man. Thank you so much for reading, dude!
22nd-Sep-2007 06:04 am (UTC)
:worships you a little bit:

I knew when I requested Dean/Gordon in my [info]clexathon prompt it would be tricky (does anyone like this pairing?), but I also knew that someone of your talent would pull it off gracefully (even if it initially threw you for a loop. ;) )

Thank you for this, truly.

I looove that it's from Gordon's perspective. His voice just sounds right (dig that he still calls Sammy "Sammy"--what a dick) and his take on Dean is wonderful.

The frame you chose for this is excelelnt--if Dean/Gordon were to happen, this is it.

...I won't mention what the "Good boy" bit did for me. Just, yes.

Thank you, again. You've made my evening.
22nd-Sep-2007 06:39 am (UTC)
**blush** Thank you so, so much! I'm so pleased that you liked it! Heh, it was kind of funny - I sat down and had several serious discussions about your prompt, what time frame would be best, how to approach Gordon's voice and mannerisms, and I made up my mind early on that I didn't want to portray him as Bad, you know? He's so convinced that he's righteous and that's what makes him such a cool character, it would've been a shame not to really play with it. Yeah, it did sort of throw me for a loop, but mostly because ... well, I hope because I wanted to do it justice, you know what I mean? It was a really fun and challenging prompt, and thank you for giving it to me, and for picking me for your fic!
22nd-Sep-2007 06:59 am (UTC)
HOLY JESUS, BOTH OF THESE ROCK SO HARD.
22nd-Sep-2007 07:49 am (UTC)
Aaahaha! Thank you! **beams**
22nd-Sep-2007 08:24 am (UTC)


Have you bought your shirt yet, Chad? Because if you haven't, we were going to suggest that you put "Hollywood's leading pro-life activist!" on the back. >.>
22nd-Sep-2007 05:17 pm (UTC)
Nooo, I haven't ... I'm probably not going to get a shirt, man. I can't exactly afford it right now; food and shelter are pretty much the priorities right now.
22nd-Sep-2007 05:43 pm (UTC)
;_;

YOU HAVE TO BUY A SHIRT. KREW SOLIDARITY, DUDE.
22nd-Sep-2007 05:55 pm (UTC)
NO MONEY, DUDE. NO CAN DO. I KNOW, IT MAKES ME A SAD MAYHEM.
22nd-Sep-2007 06:19 pm (UTC)
;_;

Make your boy buy it for you! BOYS ARE SUPPOSED TO BUY THINGS.
23rd-Sep-2007 04:06 am (UTC)
AHAHAHAHAHA. He's just as poor as I am, babe. And not too into the whole fandom thing, at all. Man, I can just imagine how that conversation would go.
23rd-Sep-2007 06:43 am (UTC)
>.>

Find a sugar daddy? A fandom sugar daddy?
23rd-Sep-2007 05:29 pm (UTC)
Heh, man, I wish.
22nd-Sep-2007 08:49 pm (UTC)
Oh wow! The first is beautiful and hot, and just the way I like the boys.

And Gordon! That gave me chills, the way he's so smug, thinking that he's a people person, and the way he refers to Sam is just downright creepy. You totally pulled this off, and it's amazing!

Wonderful job on both. :D
23rd-Sep-2007 04:09 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! Man ... the biggest thing that I love about Gordon is how thoroughly convinced he is of his own righteousness, of how awesome a hunter he is. That makes him so much creepier than any of his craziness, to me.
22nd-Sep-2007 11:41 pm (UTC)
Damn! Glad I came across these - seriously, so hot I think my brain just leaked out my ear...

...That's gonna be a bitch to clean up.
23rd-Sep-2007 04:10 am (UTC)
Ahahaha, thank you so much! **offers a mop**
23rd-Sep-2007 11:04 am (UTC)
I almost didn't read the Dean/Gordon one but I'm so glad I did. Dean is just so interesting in both of these. He's so, not submissive exactly, but soft? Usually he's all take charge and growly but here you've presented a completely different side. He's soft and needy and kinda right where he wants to be.
23rd-Sep-2007 05:44 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! Actually, one of the things that really drew me to Dean is that weird submissiveness - he's so growly and in charge and every once in a while he just hands the reins over so thoroughly that it's striking, you know? Especially after his dad died, he needed so badly for someone to just tell him what to do.
23rd-Sep-2007 04:21 pm (UTC)
Ohhhhh yes. Exactly what I wanted. I swear, you write the bestest, hottest little vignettes ever. As always, it's the details that get me. The knobs of his spine. The running imagery of going belly-up. I love it! Thank you SO much.

And a bonus dose of Gordon/Dean! I've never read them together before. I think I might have to start.
14th-May-2008 04:53 pm (UTC)
(The world's latest reply to a comment, I am horrible)

Thank you so much! I can't believe that I never answered your comment, especially when the damn story is for you! I suck, man. Can you ever forgive me? But I'm glad either way that you enjoyed it!
23rd-Sep-2007 09:56 pm (UTC)
The Gordon/Dean. Wow. It kind of caught me off guard 'cause I couldn't really fathom how it would work, but this totally totally does. And it hurts just right.
14th-May-2008 04:54 pm (UTC)
(Good lord, I never replied to you, I suck so hard)

Thank you! I think I sat down and had a Very Serious Conversation to try and figure out how I could get Gordon/Dean to work - it's such a weird, intense sort of pairing, and it was an awesome challenge for me.
14th-May-2008 02:39 pm (UTC)
I read this, the second one particularly, ages ago and I love it just as much as I did then. Gordon/Dean is a strange, yet wonderful pairing (biting in "Fresh Blood" anyone?) and I love it so, so much.

And, Lord this is embarrassing, but may I friend you? I've seen you around on other journals and you seem awesome, not to mention all the great fic and I'll be leaving now. *runs and hides*
14th-May-2008 05:06 pm (UTC)
Hah! Holy crap, someone left me a comment on a public post just the other day saying they were looking for a Gordon/Dean fic, and I went "... Gordon/Dean? I've never written that." **facepalm** It's like finding a 20$ bill in your pocket, man, seriously.

Hey, no need to run and hide! I don't bite ;). I'm so happy to hear that something I did (especially this little Gordon/Dean ficlet, hah!) could've stuck in your mind. I've friended you back, and am glad to meet you!
21st-May-2008 08:40 am (UTC)
You have Gordon's voice down to a notch. And it gives me the creeps, and yet you make it work so well.
*shivers*
21st-May-2008 05:31 pm (UTC)
God, I love Gordon. He's so much fun. He's so damn creepy. That ficlet kicked my ASS, man. **shakes head** Thank you so much!!
29th-May-2008 04:38 am (UTC)
DAMN, woman!!! You is a MASTER!! #1 is scorching and #2 is delicious and touching and I have a MAJOR weakness for this pairing.

I think I'm in love with you.
29th-May-2008 05:11 am (UTC)
Ahahaha! **blushes like crazy** Thank you so much! Love back, of course of course ;).
30th-May-2008 12:39 am (UTC)
Okay, you are probably going to think I'm a nut case. Well, maybe MORE of a nut case, but I wonder if you might allow me to podfic the Gordon/Dean fic? With a few exceptions, I only request to podfic stories that really stick with me, and this is definitely one of those.

Hope to hear from you. :-)

and thanks for friending me back! I feel special!
31st-May-2008 05:35 am (UTC)
Heee! Hey, that would be awesome, I would be thrilled if you would! I'm so glad to hear that it stuck with you enough to want to podfic it - and you are silly, man, you're gonna give me a complex ;). Thank you, again, for recording a story of mine! It's really exciting for me and I loved your recording of the Dean/Victor story! I'm taking a roadtrip next month and definitely plan on cruising the podfic communities for stuff to listen to :D.
1st-Jun-2008 10:36 pm (UTC)
Okay, here we go! It's all recorded and posted here: http://community.livejournal.com/amplificathon/85688.html

Hope you like it! :-) And thanks again for letting me record it. YUM!
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